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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 9:39 pm | |
| (Yeah... right now I can't really open my right eye without being in pain, and I'm sick to my stomach to boot. -~-" If I'm any worse tomorrow, I'm just gonna set up an appointment to get it lanced. It just hurts too much, and the medicine is doing absolutely nothing to help.
NOW KISS! *makes the plushies kiss again* e3e? Jawline kisses?
Laura: E-excuse me?! o//A//<") | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 9:42 pm | |
| (omo"... I just hope the lancing goes well if it happens.
e3e THEY ARE GOING TO BE THE DEATH OF ME IN PANTHEON! *dies* Can I read the rest of chapter one? o3o?
Roy: o//n//o"? *touches his face*) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 9:46 pm | |
| (Yeah... It's a lot of discomfort and grossness to deal with, but at least it got the icky stuff out and stopped making me feel so miserable for a while.
I WILL HAVE TO INCORPORATE THE KISSES EVERYWHERE. INCLUDING LAURA SEDUCING ROY! XD
Okay. o3o I took out the little fight scene, since I decided it came off as messy, and I liked the idea of Lucas being the idiotic president who actually just died in a car accident while he was out for a late-night joyride in one of his expensive sports cars. o3o" Lucas was a good man at heart, but not a born leader, and he often made foolish choices, or not enough choices, and let his position get to his head. Roy, in the book, is a bit ashamed to live in the Capital House, but the Council insists he needs to live a somewhat luxurious life so people take him seriously as the leader of a nation. He still misses his little home by the woods, though. XD
Laura: o//~//o" Ohhhh dear...) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 9:49 pm | |
| (Yeah... omo
YES YOU FUCKING DO. AND SOMEONE MAYBE WALKING IN ON THEM. XD
Well, um...
P!Roy: *slaps P!Lucas* WHAT THE FUCK LUCAS?!
Pretty much what I thought. XD
I think that seems more Roy-like... XP
D!Roy: o//n//o") | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 9:55 pm | |
| (Lucas did his best, and he was a great person, just not the best leader. o3o"
P!Lucas: At least I'm not evil... omo"
True that. XD
KISSES KISSES KISSES. AND WALKING IN ON THE PRESIDENT AND HIS WIFE. XDDDDDD
P!Laura: Oh noes... o~o"
*imagining Jacques walking in on his parents at some point* "Papa, Mama, what are you doing...?" And then they scramble to straighten their clothes and fix their hair while assuring him that they were just snuggling or something. XD
And then the big question, when Laura winds up pregnant with Angelique... "Where do babies come from?"
P!Roy's answer: "Your mother, son. That is all you need to know." XDDDD) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 9:58 pm | |
| (Nope. XD
P!Roy: When I'm dead, I'm going to fucking strangle you until you're even more dead. ene
Yeah... At least he wasn't a traitor... o7o"
YES PLEASE! X3
P!Roy: o//n//o"
Oh God yes.... XDDDD I can't wait for that.) | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
Posts : 4706 Join date : 2014-05-29
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:11 pm | |
| (Ah the colors burn my eyes =A=' *cuddles Blueh and Chirpy* Save me from the bright colors. *totally hasn't read almost of the Death Note mangas*) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:13 pm | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
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| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:22 pm | |
| (Babies... *squeals and rolls across the floor* >w<
Jacques and Lainey will be so much fun to write with, too... They become relatively important characters, along with Angelique, at some later point in the novel.
Oh dear, I poofed. o~o" I started typing this response, then sort of zoned out... o7o") | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
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| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:25 pm | |
| (That's fine Chirpy, I'm still doing a bit of schoolwork even though it's 7:24 070') | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:25 pm | |
| (CHILDREN! >7<! *dies* <3
It's okay. ^^' I should probably go to bed soon anyway... *really wants to read the rest of the revised chapter 1 of Pantheon* o3o") | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:32 pm | |
| (I sent the PDF, Blueh. o3o I like Chapter One a lot better now, and I've updated my little headers for each chapter. owo They're gonna have the chapter number, then "subject," date, and location. The "subject" is new, sort of like a chapter title.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:33 pm | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:34 pm | |
| (*huggles the Sil* It's 10:30 here... I'm sleepy... =7="
But I'm in the mood for Pipase, so I'll probably come up with something nice and feelsy and Chasey for tomorrow.) | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
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| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Tue Oct 07, 2014 11:10 pm | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 6:34 am | |
| (*reads the updated first chapter of Pantheon* *slaps P!Roy across the face* HOW THE FUCK COULD YOU FORGET YOUR OWN PET ALMOST?!
P!Roy: I didn't mean it! I was tired and kind of freaking the hell out!
No kidding-- you threw up in the shower.
P!Roy: I know! ene
-_- Go and take a power nap.
P!Roy: What?
A power nap! Take a 10-20 minute nap before your inauguration. You're guaranteed to feel better.) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:03 am | |
| (P!Laura: He's going through a lot... o~o" *hugs him*
I did the math, and by the time I complete my revision up to Chapter Four (which will now be Chapter Five since I'm adding a new chapter for the inauguration and stuff), the book will already be over 100 pages long, if I revise to the extent that I did for the first chapter. o7o" This is awesome.
I'm sitting in my biology class... Blegh. The professor isn't here yet and I'm already bored. XD) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:17 am | |
| (P!Roy: All because Lucas was a fucking dumbass and got himself killed. ene
Yeah... o7o' In chapter two, I just assumed that they got Jax sometime after Roy's presidency, but I think I like that better. But holy shit. That's awesome. XD
I'm almost done in period one science... It's the last chemistry lesson. o3o') | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:39 am | |
| (Ew, chemistry... We are doing biochemistry and I hate it. XD
P!Lucas: Hey! I didn't know I'd be in mortal danger by driving around!
It was all bad luck... o7o" And yeah, I had to bring Jax in a bit earlier... I couldn't resist. And it makes more sense.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 11:08 am | |
| (o7o' That doesn't sound fun.
P!Roy: -n-'
Yeah... o3o' And P!Roy nearly forgot him. XD) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
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| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 11:44 am | |
| (*rolls* o3o
He was panicking. Jax forgives him. XD) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 12:05 pm | |
| (o3o
Yeah... XP By the way, P!Nick is a fucking badass. And his power would make him go all Matrix and shit.) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 1:02 pm | |
| (Nick is definitely going to be a recurring character. He's Laura's personal guard... And thus we have the repetitive jokes about them in awkward situations. XD I'm looking forward to that.) | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
Posts : 4706 Join date : 2014-05-29
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 1:24 pm | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed Oct 08, 2014 2:04 pm | |
| (P!Nick: o~o'
Yeah... That's going to be fun. XD) | |
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